Hi my name is Honor and i attend mangapapa school and i like how you remembered to put a capital letter at the start and at the start of your writing and a capital letter at the start of your name and a full stop at the end. I liked what you did after you went to the warehouse. Why didnt you tell us what time it was?
Kia ora. My name is Casius and I attend Mangapapa School school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. I like that you were telling us about your day at the warehouse. And you were hanging with your family.how much was the keyboard and headset and the dinner. Also good job on telling stuff about what you did for your holiday
Hi Rico i really like how you explained what you did in those two weeks and i think you did very well and i have a question how was the keyboard and headset.
Kia ora It's me Zeke from Kotare I think that your dad is nice if he let you, your brother and your sister get one thing each,also do you know how much everything was.
Hi my name is myra I attend at at te hapara in kotare I like how you said that u got to choose anything and you choose a keyboard but my question is do you use your keyboard a lot
Kia ora. My name is Te Arohanui and I attend Te hapara school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti.l really liked the hair .This reminds me of my avter.next time you could work on your eres.ka rawe!Te Arohanui
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ReplyDeleteHi my name is Honor and i attend mangapapa school and i like how you remembered to put a capital letter at the start and at the start of your writing and a capital letter at the start of your name and a full stop at the end. I liked what you did after you went to the warehouse. Why didnt you tell us what time it was?
ReplyDeleteKia ora. My name is Casius and I attend Mangapapa School school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. I like that you were telling us about your day at the warehouse. And you were hanging with your family.how much was the keyboard and headset and the dinner. Also good job on telling stuff about what you did for your holiday
ReplyDeleteHi Rico i really like how you explained what you did in those two weeks and i think you did very well and i have a question how was the keyboard and headset.
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ReplyDeleteKia ora It's me Zeke from Kotare I think that your dad is nice if he let you, your brother and your sister get one thing each,also do you know how much everything was.
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Have you been using your keyboard a lot?
ReplyDeleteHello Ricco this Is Ezra Franklin. >:)
ReplyDeleteHi my name is myra I attend at at te hapara in kotare I like how you said that u got to choose anything and you choose a keyboard but my question is do you use your keyboard a lot
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ReplyDeleteKia ora. My name is Te Arohanui and I attend Te hapara school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti.l really liked the hair .This reminds me of my avter.next time you could work on your eres.ka rawe!Te Arohanui